Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts

Sunday, September 8, 2019

Feedback Strategies

One of the articles that I read was an article called "Why Do So Many Managers Avoid Giving Praise?". The article goes into detail of how managers go about feedback to their employees. Many managers saw that the negative comments were more effective and common than the positive comments. Managers lack of positive praise showed to have a better impact on the employee, when it comes to product, compared to positive feedback. In my opinion, the motive of negative feedback causes a reaction in the employees brain to improve. This is a loss of satisfaction and the need to improve to get to that point. The positive feedback would cause an acceptance of work and then quality drops significantly.
https://hbr.org/2017/05/why-do-so-many-managers-avoid-giving-praise
The other article that I read was "Be a Mirror: Give Readers Feedback That Fosters a Growth Mindset". This article was pretty much a article on commenting on others work and projects. Its' main goal was to get the point across that you need to be a mirror. It doesn't mean give them what they want to hear, but give them something to build on when it comes to their work. Positive feedback is good in writing, but there always needs to be a hint of negative, so the writer knows what to build on from the point that you gave. I really enjoyed the article because that is something I really need to work on when commenting. I got the positive feedback down, but I still need to be able to do the little negative hint to cause improvement in the work
https://literacyworldwide.org/blog/literacy-daily/2015/12/08/be-a-mirror-give-readers-feedback-that-fosters-a-growth-mindset
https://images.app.goo.gl/UaFtErZ4Ddt7cj869

Topic Research

I have decided to do a Dog Saga. This comes from the example storybook that was given called "Dog Diaries". I want to create a saga of my dog Jovi. I don't have many pictures of him since he lives at home, but he is my buddy and he deserves the spotlight. The name of the series will be Jovi: The Dog of All Dogs. Jovi is loving puppy that I wish I could have brought to Oklahoma with me, but my mother would not all it to happen. I have a couple story ideas in mind, and some are more realistic than others.
1. The Beginning: This will be an intro story of my dog. It was a crazy, cool journey as it was a surprise, to me, that Jovi came into my life. Jovi is a very special dog!
2. Sports Day: Jovi is really good at sports. He was recruited by the Top Dog (pun) University in the United States in multiple sports. Jovi has crazy vertical and amazing moves that you will have to read see the immaculate impact that he has.
3. Running for Office: Jovi has all skills necessary to become the next great President of the United States. He has the character and will power to have great change and have the nation prosper. 
Personal Pic of Jovi

Source: http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2017/07/project-idea-dogs.html

Thursday, September 5, 2019

Week 3 Story: The KATostrophic Mistake

It was dark, gloomy night in the town of Fluffle, Illinois. There was a young man named Carl that called this small town his home. Carl had just began his senior year of high school but something was very wrong once he started class. Carl would stay away from everyone and wouldn't talk to anyone at all. Carl was the highlight of his class as he was brilliant and always cracking jokes to other students. What students didn't know was that Carl lost his mother and his precious cat, Gary. Gary was one of his only highlights when he was home. Carl's dad was always "at a friends" and never was around Carl. Carl was in dark place and nothing could replace Gary and the hole that was in his heart from his lost.

Carl began to miss school days at a time. He would show up about once a week and his teachers and peers began to become concerned. Eventually someone told the counselor that Carl needed to be talked to and see what was going on. "What has been going on?" said the counselor. Carl explained his story and just said he needed to be home to take care of his house and other responsibilities. The counselor released Carl without hesitation and decided that he was fit to go on with what he is doing. Carl returned home and began on his master plan.

Carl began his plan to bring back Gary. Carl would begin to construct a life-size version of Gary and the process would take a while but it was worth the wait, for a while at least. Carl would eventually create Gary and Carl's mood made a drastic improvement. Gary II was perfect. He was exactly like the original and even better in some aspects. Gary II would continue to do everything that Carl's heart desired until one fateful day.

Gary II escaped Carl's home and it was the beginning of the end. Gary II was introduced to the world and many people saw the problem and the scary part of Gary II. This show of technology proved that anything could be created and the fact that robots could be more now than future. Gary II had a slight malfunction once he got out of the house and began to reek havoc on Fluffle. Carl began to see the news pop up on social media of a cat causing so much harm to a small town. Carl had to do that unthinkable and destroy such a precious creation that was meant to help and not harm. Carl found Gary II and destroyed the robot with a few hits. Carl was sad over the fact that he had just destroyed his precious robot but he realized the people and real living things are the way to go and make yourself cope with loss.
The face of Gary, Carl's precious cat https://images.app.goo.gl/7kZC9sjuKqXwjjC89
Author's Note: I took the idea from "The Rabbi's Bogey-man" and put my own twist. I add a tragic backstory to my creator compared to the rabbi just being a outcast and unwanted. The rabbi story has a lot of elements I used in my own story from the reason to create the robot to the ending. Both stories have the destruction of the robots and the main character become the hero after the robot is gone. My story is a story of triumph and the thought and want to survive the fight against depression. There is always someone or something that can help you cope and you are never alone no matter how deep you are. 
Bibliography: Jewish Fairy Tales and Legends by Gertrude Landa (1919). http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2014/04/jewish-fairy-tales-rabbis-bogey-man.html

Wednesday, September 4, 2019

Reading Notes: Jewish Fairy Tales Part B

For part B, I decided on the story of "The Rabbi's Bogey-Man". The story begins as all stories do with a little background information and a little foreshadowing. I am a big fan of the foreshadowing as it gives me, the reader, a chance to do some thinking about the story and what I can expect or even wonder about the next move of the story. The people of Rabbi Lion's town were scared of the rabbi. People through out the town saw that blue and red flames could be seen in his windows at night, and it was believed he was calling demons and witches. This story has a lovely start as the main character is seen as the villain in his town and I love the fact that he is portrayed in that fashion. The rabbi then proceeded to make a creature that was a robotic woman to aid the rabbi. The story continues as the town finds out about the robot and the king wanted the robot to be turned over, but the rabbi convinced the king to let the rabbi keep. The story then takes a classic turn when the rabbi's creation turns bad and begins to try to attack the synagogue and break in. The rabbi turns hero and destroys the monster and was left in pieces. The rabbi kept his triumph and told the story for years to come. I love stories like this as the bad guy, in the beginning, proves himself/herself to be a person of good and help those who thought he was a villain. Rabbi Lion seemed he was just a weird, old man that was creating robots for himself, but he actually showed that what he does can help the town as well as he is prepared to destroy and take down his creation if need be.


Tuesday, September 3, 2019

Reading Notes: Jewish Fairy Tales, Part A

For part A of the Jewish Fairy Tales, I read "The Quarrel of Cat and Dog". I chose the Jewish Fairy Tales list as it sounded like a unit that would give me a cool and different perspective on fairy tales and the storytelling in Israel at this time. The story starts like any other story with a small backstory, and then, all of a sudden, everything goes South and causes turmoil. The friends, the cat and dog, were best buddies then the Winter began to cause a rift between the two. The story continues with arguments and that figuring out of the rift and how destroyed the relationship was. There is one instance that I would like to bring up and that is when the cat comes to Adam for help. It seem generic, but when the cat asks Adam to do something about the dog it is crazy to thing about. The cat goes up to Adam complaining about how the dog had been forbidden from the premises. It gives the feel of a divorce or a really hard break that is occurring between the two animals. It does make it easy to choose and let Adam know as the cat can talk and communicate with great accuracy with Adam. It made me chuckle a bit as a cat is controlling the owners decisions and that will never happen in my life but it does in this story. It was a very interesting concept of a dog and cat arguing and making decisions compared to the stories with just people. The aspect of animals gives readers a new thing to focus and want to read as animals are a lot more fun to read about. They are really easy to relate two as well as animals can change moods and feeling very quickly and most of the time authors want to have multiple ways to help engage and audience.
Dog and Cat just chilling at home. https://images.app.goo.gl/t8szX3XZBWAittx38
Bibliography: Jewish Fairy Tales and Legends by Gertrude Landa (1919). .http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2014/04/jewish-fairy-tales-quarrel-of-cat-and.html